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davidmuleguy
04-25-2009, 04:55 AM
Unlike my other stories,that Mike in Admin has been kind enough to post for me,which are 99% fantasy,this is a true story.Or, maybe 99% true. lol.

Shopping at the supermarket used to be a dull,tiresome chore,that just needed to be done. Until about 2 months ago,when all that changed. Since then,it has been an exciting,much looked forward to adventure,that I just have to do.
I had just picked up a hand basket,and was about to make a bee line down an aisle to my first grocery item,when I stopped in my tracks.Stood with her back to me,and chatting to a female colleague,was a short,slightly built lady,with short black hair, who can't be much more than 5 feet tall,and who I later discovered to be one of the supervisors.She wore (and I have never seen her wear anything else),black ballet flats,and black cotton stockings,(I think they are).She was standing with all of her weight,on her right leg,and she was pressing the toes of her left foot on the back of the heel of her left black ballet flat,causing the toe end to see saw up and down.After enjoying this sight for a couple of moments,I thought I had better move on.
But then,this little pixie like lady slipped back into her left shoe,stood on her left leg,and she immediately slipped her right foot out of her black ballet flat,and she rested the top of her foot on her shoe,revealing the whole of her black stocking covered right foot,and she began to flex and scrunch the toes of her dainty little foot.Well,I was'nt going anywhere,now,she had firmly rooted me to the spot,with her pixie like powers.I must have stood there and gawped,for some time,watching her switch from foot to foot,and loving her floor show,as I 'checked out' her active,playful,dainty feet.But then,I saw that her colleague was looking at me with a strange expression,and,the shoeplaying pixie lady,upon seeing her expression,turned around,and I saw her pretty,pixie face for the first time,as she made eye contact with me for a moment,before I hastily continued with my shopping,and I wondered if her colleague had noticed,and/or told the pixie lady about my 'Supermarket Checkout'.
The following week,I had forgotten all about this incident,thinking it to be a one off,lucky experience.But,as I was making my way to the tills,and,
groaning inwardly with dismay,when I saw the length of the queues,I saw the little,pretty pixie lady,who had stationed herself in front of the tills,so as to be available to assist with any problems that the till girls may have,I surmised.Automatically,my eyes were immediately drawn to her feet.I was not disappointed.While I pretended to study the length of the queues,from the corner of my eye,I excitedly spied on her,as she heel popped,and dipped her dainty,black stockinged feet,from her black ballet flats,and scrunched and flexed her toes.As soon as she made eye contact with me,I imagined there was a look of recognition,in her eyes,and I immediately joined the queue that I had deliberately chosen:the longest queue! Now,I had to be careful,as she seemed to be looking in my direction more freqently,and I did'nt know if it was just my imagination,or whether she was on to me,had sussed my secret little spying game,and was now actually trying to catch me red handed,in my own version,of 'Supermarket Checkout'.
The following week,my visit to the supermarket was not just about buying groceries,but had a sneaky,naughty, ulterior motive to it.This week,though,at first,it seemed that I was to be disappointed,as I could not see the black stockinged,black ballet flat wearing,heel popping,toe scrunching supervisor,who I now thought of as 'The Pixie Lady'.I was a little shocked,at the level of disappointment I felt,at missing out,at being deprived of what I was hoping would become my weekly treat.A naughty treat,but you have to indulge your self from time to time,don't you? lol.But,after I had completed my shopping,and arrived at the tills,low and behold! So that was why I could'nt find her! 'The Pixie Lady' was actually serving at one of the tills! Knowing what to do,I queued at the till to the left of 'The Pixie Lady's.When I arrived at my till,I looked to my right,and 'The Pixie Lady' was right there,sat on a stool with her back to me.Oh,boy!,was I in luck! 'The Pixie Lady' was resting her black ballet flats on a rung of her stool,and I had a little shock of excitement,as though I was doing something wrong lol,as I soaked up the glorious sight.I could see the whole of the soles of both of her black cotton stockinged,dainty little feet,precariously,or perhaps, expertly,lol,balanced on the rung of her stool. Oh,man,oh man! I was finally brought back to Earth,when the girl at my till touched my arm to get my attention,to pay for my groceries,which I then did. As I was about to leave the till,I thought I would enjoy a final peek at 'The Pixie Lady's' little treasures.But,when I turned back to her,she was staring me full in the face! As though she had sensed my worshipful adorations (oh,ok,then,my spying! lol). This time,I felt that she did recognise me,and she held me captive in her Pixie stare,until she turned around,back to her own customers.
Since then,she seems to recognise me on sight,unless my imagination is playing tricks on me! And I have had to hone my spying skills,peeping around the corners of the aisles,hiding behind other customers,and pretending to read food labels,etc.,in order to get my fixes of 'The Pixie Lady's' excitng foot antics.
My worry is that my 'Supermarket Checkout',might turn into the weekly 'Shop',if 'The Pixie Lady',for a bit of Pixieish,mischievous fun,informs on me to her colleagues.Oh,well,seeya for now,I'm off to the Supermaket!

Mike
05-10-2009, 07:04 AM
This is something many of us would have encountered in our everyday real life I believe.
Thank you for writing it out :thumbsup:

flatworm00
06-24-2009, 09:06 AM
I think we have all been there at one time or another. There is a lady that works at my local Wal-mart store who is probably in her early to mid 40's short brown hair, about 125 pounds maybe 5'2" tall. She too wears black flat ballet shoes. She is at the front of the store, supervising the check out clerks. She rocks back on one heel then the other, slips her foot in and out of her shoe, sits on a stool cross-legged and dangles one shoe and is sexy as hell! I used to hate to go to Wal-mart...now I look for an excuse to go!

davidmuleguy
10-01-2009, 11:27 PM
If you enjoyed my story 'Supermarket Checkout',an improved,and slightly longer version of it is posted on the main stories page. Hope you like the slightly longer version.

y18d
05-05-2011, 02:24 AM
Hi David. I do like your stories and your style.
If I may suggest something: maybe you could make shorter sentences, this would get your stories still more lively and easy to read. Direct speech is also a good way for liveliness.
Also please leave a space after the punctuation marks, and don't hesitate to break the paragraphs into smaller parts.
The reading experience will be much more enjoyable for your readers.
Thanks again for your stories!

eviplelaBib
05-09-2011, 04:06 AM
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davidmuleguy
05-09-2011, 11:21 PM
Hi David. I do like your stories and your style.
If I may suggest something: maybe you could make shorter sentences, this would get your stories still more lively and easy to read. Direct speech is also a good way for liveliness.
Also please leave a space after the punctuation marks, and don't hesitate to break the paragraphs into smaller parts.
The reading experience will be much more enjoyable for your readers.
Thanks again for your stories!

y18d:

Thanks for your constructive criticism. I really do appreciate it.
Usually readers who contact me tell me they enjoyed my stories, but don't criticize anything about them - I suppose they don't like to.

I know that my grammar leaves a lot to be desired, and I have tried to improve my writing over time.
For instance, in re-reading some of my early stories, I realized that I had a propensity to use too many commas, that caused a sort of stuttering effect that I found detracted from the pleasure of reading the story, and I was dismayed by the thought that readers must put off by such an annoyance.

I am very pleased that you still managed to derive some enjoyment from my stories despite their many imperfections.

On another note, you may have noticed that I have not posted any stories here for a few months.
I hope to be posting again soon though, as I have been writing a sort of spin-off story of my 'Community Service' series.
I am thinking of posting the story in about 7 Parts, with the Parts being of a rather shorter length than is more usual in my stories.

Cheers,
Dave.

y18d
05-13-2011, 07:25 AM
There's nothing wrong with your grammar, and your writing is quite enjoyable. It was more an issue of presentation, which is easily dealt with. This may be considered a minor issue, but as you mentioned, one which can swiftly deter many readers. Thanks for your taking it into account, as I can see!

The start of your Community Service story aroused my interest (and not just my interest). Brave new world… I've been searching for the continuation, hoping the action to get more fragrant, and include some bare and sweaty dainty feet… From one of your comments, I thought you already had posted the 3rd and next episodes, and I wondered where the hell they were hiding. I now understand they're still not published.
There's no hurry, take your time and hone them well! :)

davidmuleguy
05-13-2011, 10:20 PM
There's nothing wrong with your grammar, and your writing is quite enjoyable. It was more an issue of presentation, which is easily dealt with. This may be considered a minor issue, but as you mentioned, one which can swiftly deter many readers. Thanks for your taking it into account, as I can see!

The start of your Community Service story aroused my interest (and not just my interest). Brave new world… I've been searching for the continuation, hoping the action to get more fragrant, and include some bare and sweaty dainty feet… From one of your comments, I thought you already had posted the 3rd and next episodes, and I wondered where the hell they were hiding. I now understand they're still not published.
There's no hurry, take your time and hone them well! :)


I'm very pleased that you enjoyed Part 1 & Part 2 of my 'Community Service' story. And, that you were looking forward to reading the continuation.
You mentioned that you had been looking for subsequent Parts but, didn't know where they hiding, couldn't find any, and thought they must not be posted yet.

Here's the irony: they are right here at Femdom City, on the MAIN story page - hiding in 'plain sight' , I suppose you could say.

Go to the Femdom City home page, and click on the 'Stories' link.
You'll find all of my stories posted there, under 'Contribution by David' .

You might be surprised by how many I've written!
You'll have to scroll down some way to find my first story - ' The Ankle Crossing Air Hostess ' .

Also, I think you will agree that the format there makes story-reading much more easy on the eye, as compared with the forum story page.

To date, I have written 10 Parts of 'Community Service'.
I have not added to it for some time, though - I keep getting side-tracked with new story ideas.

I have another on-going story, that I have also written 10 Parts so far, and that some readers have told me they really like, called 'The Mirror' .
I have not added to this story for some time either - for the reason just stated.

I hope you enjoy reading the continuation of 'Community Service' , and please feel free to comment / discuss that, and any other of my stories.

Cheers, and thanks for taking an interest in my stories - and for your valuable advice!
Dave.